Blog Post Assignment 2

The areas in my writing I feel need the most improvement are my use of mechanics. This is both capitalization and punctuation. From time to time I tend to place punctuation marks where they do not belong. I plan on seeking the extra help needed to understand the placement of punctuation marks. I will first try to get an understanding while it is being taught. If this does not work I will further help such as after school tutoring. As a result of going to tutoring I should have a better understanding of the mechanics of grammar. I felt as if the best parts of my writing was the overall flow and in depth details. My paper made points that were very imperative steps in obtaining a job.

Hey ! I'm Isaiah D. Jones I'm 16 years old and I attend B.C Rain High. I was raised in Mobile, Alabama by a single mother because my father died before I was born. My favorite colors are lime green and ice blue. On my spare time I enjoy dancing and working. The style of dance I do is called J-Setting/Majorette. I am employed at McClain Sonic's where I am a carhop. When I am not in school, work, or dancing I enjoy watching Science Fiction movies. In this 2016-2017 school year I plan on working on my attitude and bettering my study habits. If could meet these expectations/ goals I have set for myself I think this would be a great school year for me. I look forward to bettering myself this year and encouraging my friends to do the same.